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If you've gotten this far, you are probably interested in the subject of the personal essay. Below is the complete description of the course—Lives in Common—followed by a schedule of lectures and assignments for the 15-week course.
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Instructor: Bradford Connatser
Office: Remote
Office Hours: 8:30 to 10:30 M W F and by appointment
Phone: 541-430-4548
Email: bconnatser1245@gmail.com
Mission
This fifteen-week course provides a path from
the student’s way of thinking to the conflicting, adverse thoughts
of “others.” These two poles can be reconciled through language so that the
student can
thoughtfully communicate and form relationships with people who do not share the
student’s belief—without tearing those people down. Each student will prevail
against common but often objectionable human impulses to attack “the other” by
studying exemplars of personal essays, virtually attending lectures from the
teacher, practicing writing techniques and strategies with discipline, and
finally bringing all learned writing skills to bear upon building an essay from
scratch that conveys a personal message to the reader.
Each personal essay must be
framed as a polemic, based upon a subject that is in controversy. The audience
is a vague notion of the student’s adversary, whom the student will try to
convince to listen to and appreciate an opposing point of view. The course
encourages people to think about what they have in common with those whom they
consider antithetical to their beliefs while making a case for reconciling differences. Each essay will be brief but very
rich and far more complex than the five-paragraph essay taught in high school
and college. By dedicating themselves to precision, students will compose
personal essays that appeal to a wide range of readers, weaving tapestries of
universal meaning as best anyone can. Brevity of expression will be emphasized to limit each essay
to a manageable length, which will no doubt be a startling chore.
“I have only made this letter longer because I have not had
the time to make it shorter.”
-- Blaise Pascal
Cost of the Course
This course is free but requires that each student have a
modern computer or access to one (such as the computers at the local library).
Conduct
Because the purpose of this course is to bring opposing
views and dissident voices together to explore our differences and similarities,
bigotry, intolerance, unfounded accusations, profanities, salty words, and
cursing of any kind will not be permitted in class or in assignments except,
perhaps, as a purely academic exercise to explore responses to extreme rhetoric.
Students are expected to attend classes virtually, participate in discussions,
and keep up with homework and writing assignments.
Grading
Students will not receive letter grades for their work.
Instead, successful students—those who complete all assignments and work
diligently, earnestly toward the completion of a superb essay—will be given the
opportunity to have their final essays published at livesincommon.com, which
will optionally include the biography and photograph of the author. Essays will
be polished, beautiful, and worthy of world-wide reception.
A student must gain 50 points throughout the semester to be
eligible to have his or her essay published at the end of the semester. Students
can work toward 100 points in these ways:
Seven quizzes at 0 to 5 points
each = 35 maximum points
Reading assignments = 15 maximum points
Participation in group discussions = 15 maximum points
In-class exercises = 15 maximum points
Peer reviews = 15 maximum points
Gifting expertise = 5 maximum points
Attendance Policy and Late Assignments
Because all students will be
marching in lockstep toward the objective of publishing student essays,
attendance is an essential element of this course. You are allowed three
unexcused absences without penalty. More than three may lower your accumulation
of points. Excessive unexcused absences may result in failure.
The instructor will try to help
students through difficulties. However, if a student anticipates difficulty with
meeting a deadline, contact the instructor immediately for a possible extension.
Materials
Goods and textbooks are not cheap. To make this course
available to people of all income classes and to enable people with financial
hardships to participate, all materials will be provided by the instructor, and
these materials will belong to students permanently upon receipt. Optional
materials will also be made available at no cost upon request.
Required Textbooks
The following two books will be provided to each student at no cost.
The Art of the Personal Essay: An Anthology from the Classical Era to the Present
by Phillip Lopate
Publisher: Anchor; First Edition (January 15, 1995)
Language: English
Paperback: 777 pp
ISBN-10: 038542339X
ISBN-13: 978-0385422987
Writing a Professional Life: Stories of Technical Communicators on and off the Job
Edited by Gerald Savage et al.
Publisher: Pearson; 1st edition (November 19, 2000)
Language: English
Paperback: 224 pp
ISBN-10: 9780205321063
ISBN-13: 978-0205321063
Optional Reading
Reading Exemplar Essays
Throughout the semester, the instructor will provide links
to essays from giants like George Will, Joan Didion, Sam Harris, James Baldwin,
Ralph Waldo Emerson, Mark Twain, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Bertrand Russell,
Jorge Luis Borges, Thomas Carlyle, T.S. Eliot, Friedrich Nietzsche, René
Descartes, and some favorites of the students.
Writing with Style
Optional Reading: The Sense of Style: The Thinking
Person's Guide to Writing in the 21st Century, by Steven Pinker, Penguin
Books; Reprint edition (September 22, 2015).
Writing with Logic
A video on how to argue at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVF0ojfhSrE
What Is the Personal Essay?
The personal essay is a unique type of narrative
(nonfiction storytelling of one or more real-life experiences) and expression of
thought. Embedded in the essay is a message designed to impress the reader—even
so much as to change the reader’s mind about a particular subject or position.
Personal essays are obviously written in the first person (from the author’s
point of view) and often have the power to inspire, enlighten, and/or warn
others.
What Is the Process of Writing a Personal Essay?
The process of composing a personal essay is aligned with
the process of composing other nonfiction genres, such as theme papers, research
papers, news articles, and position papers (these can be lumped into the uber
category “expository writing”).
After all students have selected subjects for their essays, we will discuss
brainstorming, which is the heart of any writing project. The student will let
all ideas flow and explore potential themes while reading about the selected
subject. Developing a theme is a rigorous rhetorical process whereby the student
must determine why he or she is writing an essay. The recommended theme of this
course is reconciliation, in which the student exposes him- or herself through
narrative, recollection, projection, logic, and other rhetorical devices. In
fact, reconciliation will be a steady motif of the course, where
you write an essay to expose your thinking on a subject (without resembling a
confessional), with a vague sense of your notional adversary as the primary
audience. We will consider the different vectors of reconciliation, such as:
Political (Democrat versus Republican)
Religious (Christian versus Muslim)
Economic (Liberal versus Conservative)
Nationality (USA versus India)
Skin Color (White versus Black)
Science (Evolution versus Creation)
After the student settles on a subject and vector of
reconciliation, he or she will continue to brainstorm and begin to conduct
research. Notes taken during brainstorming and research will then coalesce in
the student’s mind, and the student will have insight into how the essay should
be organized. Using a word processor, the student will organize, modify, add to,
and delete from his or her notes. Annotating the outline is essential at this
point. These annotations will evolve into sentences as the student starts to
think about each note.
The next stage—drafting—is the process of writing sentences
and developing paragraphs based upon the annotated outline. Continual revisions
based on self- and peer reviews result in polished work. The final step is to
lay out the essay, which may include images, tables, illustrations, and art
fonts. With the student’s permission, the teacher will then publish the
student’s personal essay at livesincomon.com. All of this takes place in a
collaborative environment, where students review the works of other students,
have meaningful conversations within groups, partner for homework assignments,
and share expertise that enables all students to accomplish the course
objectives.
During the course, the instructor will lecture, guide
students, hold regular office hours, and correspond regularly. Students will be
presented with exemplars of personal essays written by giants of the craft.
Students can then “reverse engineer” these essays to develop best practices.
Schedule of Lectures and Assignments
Day 1: Introduction to the Course
±Day 2: Structure and Parts of the Essay
Compelling or Evocative Title
Book Cover
Opening and Closing
Conclusion and the Circle Back
Heads
Images and Art
Day 3: Communication Triangle: Audience, Purpose, Subject
±Day 4: The Process of Writing an Essay
Brainstorming
Taking Notes
Selecting a Subject
Finding Your Angle
Thesis, Hypothesis, and Antithesis
Researching
Organizing and Outlining
Annotating
Reviewing and Editing
±Day 5: Editing Your Own Work
Revising
Psychic Distance
Killing Your Darlings (Copyfitting)
Repairing Noun Strings
Reading Aloud
Proofing
±Day 6: Grammar and Mechanics
Why Your Sentences Should be Error-Free
Syntax and Diction
Common Difficulties
The Rule Hoard
Breaking the Rules
Notional Accord
±Day 7: Writing Tools
Word Processors
Your Folder
Fellow Students
Dictionary
Thesaurus
±Day 8: Writing Techniques (Best Practices)
The Sentence
Sentence-Level Craft
Making Logical Connections
Using Signal Words and Guardrails
Engagement
Arresting the Reader’s Attention
Writing Clearly
Coherence
Vocabularies and Specialized Discourse
Active versus Passive
±Day 9: Writing Techniques (Best Practices) Continued
Writing the Paragraph
Organization
Installing a Hook
Developing a Paragraph
Theme-Rheme
±Day 10: Writing Techniques (Best Practices) Continued
Literary Techniques
Show Don’t Tell
Suspension of Disbelief
Objective Correlative
Figurative Language
±Day 11: Writing Techniques (Best Practices) Continued
Flow
Style and Tone
Conversational
Reactive versus Reflective Response
Formal versus Informal
Dry Delivery
Wit
Irony and Sarcasm
Point of View (POV)
±Day 12: Writing Techniques (Best Practices) Continued
Humor
Verisimilitude
Life Experiences
±Day 13: Writing Techniques (Best Practices) Continued
±Day 14: Rhetorical Modes
Narration
Description
Exposition
Argumentation
Persuasion
Logos, Ethos, and Pathos
Day 15: Using Dialogue
Day 16: Understanding Silent Speech and It’s Implications
Day 17: Avoiding Rhetorical Fallacies
Day 18: Being Vulnerable and Revealing in Your Prose
Day 19: Developing Characters
Day 20: Naming of the Parts
±Day 21: Psychology
Psychology of the Writer
Psychology of the Reader
Day 22: The Lesson or Moral of the Story
Day 23: Analysis, Precision, and Accuracy
±Day 24: Art and Layout
Illustration
Photography
Image Processing
Font Treatments
Organization Plan
Layout
Sidebars
Scholar’s Margin
The Z Scan
Day 25: Copyright
Day 26: Plagiarism
Bonus: Essay Design in HTML